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Painting
12-23-2013, 12:19 AM,
#1
Painting
You know the dealio -- share and post your paintings and then let ME critique them & be dat annoying artsy kid

brown leaf
[Image: i03u.jpg]

Done around October 2013 with tempera paint.
This was an assignment I had to do for school -- a magnification. I snatched some ye olde leaf off the internet and painted it at that point.

I do not like this artwork. It feels like it could be done much better -- and it could. I was running out of time so I rush with the shadows, and that's why I believe it's the primary reason why it looks like garbage. I also did not get the chance to add more detail, which it righteously needed. Because of that, it doesn't feel realistic almost at all due to its absence.
The most of what I like from this painting are the roots, which I still feel it could be done a bit better (kind of going back to the detail complaint). If I did some very thin black line across the roots, it would look much more realistic.
12-23-2013, 12:23 AM,
#2
RE: Painting
Nice!
Time to realize that the truth is not so clear!!!
Iconoclast - Silence
12-23-2013, 12:28 PM,
#3
RE: Painting
Thank you.
In school, I am now painting on canvas of a self-portrait with acrylic paint. I don't know if I'll be able to get it up on view for the internet, but we'll see in the future.
12-23-2013, 10:30 PM,
#4
RE: Painting
That is really good, keen to see more Smile
Smoke durries, eat curries.
11-10-2016, 09:16 AM,
#5
RE: Painting
Here's my fan-art to one of the Lucio Fulci's most beloved horror films.

[Image: 14947669_1304770819579629_85330653630664...e=588E3D5C]
we slip through mansions with fences full-grown.
we slip through streetlights in crooked rows.
I saw the sky split in two: one half jealous and one half cruel.

Camouflage, Camouflage by The Blood Brothers
01-20-2017, 03:55 AM,
#6
RE: Painting
Here's my other painting that is kinda more personal to me.


[Image: 16003027_1387802854609758_31950231504347...e=5916A601]\
we slip through mansions with fences full-grown.
we slip through streetlights in crooked rows.
I saw the sky split in two: one half jealous and one half cruel.

Camouflage, Camouflage by The Blood Brothers
01-20-2017, 09:14 PM,
#7
RE: Painting
(01-20-2017, 03:55 AM)PhillipStounn Wrote: Here's my other painting that is kinda more personal to me.


[Image: 16003027_1387802854609758_31950231504347...e=5916A601]\

I get what you're going for, but this type of art just looks so trite..
If you get more original ideas it would definitely be better.
That's just my opinion though Big Grin
Aan de oevers van de tijd,

hing ik maar wat rond.
01-21-2017, 04:26 AM,
#8
RE: Painting
(01-20-2017, 09:14 PM)Jerome Wrote:
(01-20-2017, 03:55 AM)PhillipStounn Wrote: Here's my other painting that is kinda more personal to me.


[Image: 16003027_1387802854609758_31950231504347...e=5916A601]\

I get what you're going for, but this type of art just looks so trite..
If you get more original ideas it would definitely be better.
That's just my opinion though Big Grin

Can you at least show me what you did better? i do not see the point in trying unless if doing it unconsciously.
we slip through mansions with fences full-grown.
we slip through streetlights in crooked rows.
I saw the sky split in two: one half jealous and one half cruel.

Camouflage, Camouflage by The Blood Brothers
01-23-2017, 06:14 AM,
#9
RE: Painting
(01-21-2017, 04:26 AM)PhillipStounn Wrote:
(01-20-2017, 09:14 PM)Jerome Wrote:
(01-20-2017, 03:55 AM)PhillipStounn Wrote: Here's my other painting that is kinda more personal to me.


[Image: 16003027_1387802854609758_31950231504347...e=5916A601]\

I get what you're going for, but this type of art just looks so trite..
If you get more original ideas it would definitely be better.
That's just my opinion though Big Grin

Can you at least show me what you did better? i do not see the point in trying unless if doing it unconsciously.
I never painted so I never did anything better.. I admire people who do though! Just keep trying and you will strike gold one day
Aan de oevers van de tijd,

hing ik maar wat rond.
01-27-2017, 09:43 AM,
#10
RE: Painting
(01-23-2017, 06:14 AM)Jerome Wrote:
(01-21-2017, 04:26 AM)PhillipStounn Wrote:
(01-20-2017, 09:14 PM)Jerome Wrote:
(01-20-2017, 03:55 AM)PhillipStounn Wrote: Here's my other painting that is kinda more personal to me.


[Image: 16003027_1387802854609758_31950231504347...e=5916A601]\

I get what you're going for, but this type of art just looks so trite..
If you get more original ideas it would definitely be better.
That's just my opinion though Big Grin

Can you at least show me what you did better? i do not see the point in trying unless if doing it unconsciously.
I never painted so I never did anything better.. I admire people who do though! Just keep trying and you will strike gold one day
Well, thanks for such constructive criticism. i really appreciate that.
we slip through mansions with fences full-grown.
we slip through streetlights in crooked rows.
I saw the sky split in two: one half jealous and one half cruel.

Camouflage, Camouflage by The Blood Brothers


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